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Public Gardens

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Rainbow of flowers scattered about
Ducks waddling aimlessly
Brook gurgling like a baby
Children giggling wildly as they roll down steep hills
Sugary, sweet ice cream melting in my mouth
Explosion of flavors erupting
Minty, fresh sent of cut grass drifting through the air
Wind swirling around me like a whirlpool
Sharp, pointy grass stabs at my bare feet
Lush
A poem that I made about this park called the Public Gardens in my city.

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